First Drafts
In this section, my viewers will be introduced to my under developed work. Through the help of my peers, I have seen the major and minor mistakes I had put in my writing/video. Their comments have helped me develop and also retain some more understanding on how to make my essay a little bit better. There is always room for improvement and my peers have definitely taken me to another level of my writing. I have many weaknesses in my grammar and going from general to specific. On the other hand, my strengths come from my introductions and creative in my essay.