Reflections
In this section, portrays my own personal thoughts on my weaknesses and strengths in my paper. By writing these reflections I learned that my writing has plenty of areas that need to be improved. I need to increase my understandings on how I should form my essay and what I want to convey to my readers. Some of the areas that I try to go above and beyond in using my observation noted and using them in an essay format. Instead of listing out my notes, I incorporated my notes into different sections of my essay. I could have gone above and beyond by adding a map of my figured world and adding more vocabulary.